Bring Life Back

"I dare not see a world they ruined"

Why do they hunger?

Why do they thirst?

Who are those creatures?

 Are they the poor?

Why did she ate, food from the garbage?

Why are her bones, proud to be seen?

She looks so tired, but no one hears.

No one dares to listen to her swollen tears.

Why is he here?

Here in the road of quarrels and fears?

Is he not in school, learning ABC's?

Is he bored of numbers, or his fate miscalculated?

What is happening to this world?

He made this once so perfectly.

We are all so beautiful and made perfectly,

But why do some of us called ugly?

Who hid equality?

Stop your cruel and intentions and set us free!

We only want a life worth living,

Cannot live in the world not worth seeing!

Am I the only one who hears?

Don't ever let them blind your visions.

I tell you, they need help and we have a mission.

Bring back the light and everything,

And everyone will again see what He truly created.

And you will know that you are one masterpiece :)

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I esp like that last line for it is so true.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the ending, you express this subject well within feeling and questions fulfilling the lines in this write. Nice one.

[Chris]

So its not letter perfect... neither am I nor anyone else. We're human and flawed. You've valid and strong thoughts and if more spoke them aloud just maybe things would change... Don't ever stop questioning what you feel isn't 'right'.

Take care,
Chris

[Raven Starhawk]

A...I am not sure exactly how to write this... I suppose I can say it was penned well but it was penned better than just well. It flowed so flawlessly and magically.

[Liza]

thought provoking questions concerned to make a connection throughout the neglect and disconnection - the acknowledgement to existence is presented with care...of divine surrender

[Everett DeValle]

I agree with Perly, she said it best.

What a great message in your poem, and also the perceptiveness you have with the world around you. It is refreshing to contemplate on such issues eloquently spoken from a poetic perspective.

[?]

Bring back the light and everything,
And everyone will again see what He truly created.

If only...
He did create a beautiful place for us, and now its not so beautiful anymore.
Greed, selfishness, lust, etc. took over. If only...we could all start all over.
I love you thoughts on this piece and your previous...beautiful and inspirational