"Its Up to You"

"We create our destinies"

Be yourself and love your abilities.

See all your wonders, be proud and loud.

Feel free to paint your own world,

Live a life you want.

They would say words that might hurt,

But trust me, doubting yourself would hurt more.

Sealed be your lips, ears be deaf.

Their words are nothing but part of devil's sneaky game.

Have fun and learn to smile,

Stop and listen plus, pray for awhile.

See God's plans and put your own twist,

 "Do your best and God will do the rest",

Now, you made that saying come alive in style.

Though not part of your life,

I would like to play the part of dear brother to you.

I hope you see what lies ahead,

And hopefully, you can tell 'bout it too.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A inspirational piece, really nice. I love the message in this and the care and comfort. I enjoyed this, and really like the last 2 lines in the second stanza.

[Jazique]

Nice and up beat poem really bringing a smile upon someone face when their becoming down. The lines with there messages of meaning are really good and I like and believe what you say at the top "We create our destinies" and I'm with you on the praying as he's my best friend too. Excellent job with the positive energy poem.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Really positive message here...
Good write.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Be proud of who you are and don't try to impress others by following their actions. A message clearly visible in this poem which makes it even more alluring even if short.

[HeIsWe]

This is amazing. You're a really good writer.

[Raven Starhawk]

Stunning poem. It features life's avenues but offers only choices and these choices lead us toward many other roads frequented by many other souls who want to explore their own individuality.