Friends

Sweet

Another year has come and gone,
And you're still standing here today.
Be glad you're not six feet underground,
Because you're doing better than okay.

Please cherish every moment you have,
For every second could be your last.
Look forward to your future,
Never exclude us from your past.

Your emotional pain can never be erased,
But I'm here to scrub my best.
Have the patience to wait with me,
While I clean up your emotional mess.

It's not often you find a friend,
Who could read your mind and soul.
One who could lead and also follow,
The path you choose to go.

I will be here many birthdays later,
And I hope you'll do the same.
For without you in my life,
I would have myself to blame.

Please don't think I don't love you,
Because I haven't said it enough.
Because I do and always will,
Nothing can losen this bond so tough.

There's two type of people who loves you,
And I'll name them both to you.
Your friends because they care,
And your family because they always do.

So when you're feeling down and sad,
Read this poem with my voice in mind.
Every word means "I love You."
And "I'll never leave you behind."

Reviews

[Enthusiast]

Dear Amber,

a lovely, uplifting poem. There are some mistakes ("there's two type of people who loves you," etc) and inconsistencies but the subject matter is true and well told. Keep up the good work!

[Buni]

this is such a lovely poem!
really shows how much you care about your friends! they're lucky to have you!
a really nice read!