Pain

All this pain within me
It never seems to leave
I've given all I can give
Now there's nothing left of me

God please help me
I can't live like this anymore
I've become too weak
Now I've fallen to the floor

I'm begging on my knees
Please take away this pain
I'm continuing to get weak
I think I'm starting to go insane

I will hold my head up high
Until I become strong again
I feel like I'm going to die
But my heart I know you will mend

Author's Note

ignore grammar, tell me if it sucks

Reviews

[Chris]

Lovely poem full of sadness. Wonderful writing Amber.

[Amber]

Thank you so much. That's how I feel sometimes, you know? But thank you for the review! :)

[kayamon215]

it doesn't suck i like it :)

[}Echo{]

I really like this. I like the way it starts out in dispair and sadness and ends with hope. Very nice write. :)

[Amber]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[}Echo{]

You're Welcome. :)

[MystiqFairy]

I like this poem. It's inspiring the way you start the poem with a since of despair and end on a hopeful note. Great poem!

[Amber]

Thank you. I full of hope. I know that no matter what happens God will help me get through. Thank you for reading! :)

[Amber]

I'm*

[MystiqFairy]

Your welcome! Thanks for posting it!

[Shawna]

powerful and beautiful! love u!

[Amber]

Thank you! Love you too! :)