He Lied

"I have to pee." Go

to his bathroom. See her swim-

suit and know he lied.

Reviews

[Plexiglass]

This is another cool one. Now I'm terrible at haikus and counting syllables or rhyming so I really admire what you're doing here. You're painting very coherent and provocative scenes in three tiny lines. This one is a very good example of that. If I had one nitpick it would be to find a way to end the poem with just the word "know"--if that isn't too cheesy. And while I like the title but to see it repeated twice in like sixteen words kind of makes me wonder what you could've done if you did something else. That is all--good job.