Spring is Here

Spring is Here

A Poem by purplepenguin9
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My first haiku, inspired by the flowers I planted in my dorm room.

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Awoken by spring,

Cautiously the stems emerge

Bursting into life.

© 2009 purplepenguin9


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very simple, nice, beautiful

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was beautiful in it's simplicity. And a very good 1st :) You need to write more of these.

Posted 15 Years Ago


so true very beautifully written. I love thow flowers love to wake up to the sun.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the way the growth comes across as silent yet so alive and kinetic. This haiku illuminates the marvelous potential inherent within the springtime. The use of "unseen" as an adjective describing "warmth" feels a bit awkward to me, but I think you've created a mood that is very sensory and extremely fresh. Thank you for sharing!

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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