sunsets/reborn

a poem about losing time, death, and rebirth.

now the sun will rear its head
and the day will soon be dead
gazing upon the sullen sky
helpless knowledge that it'll die

so what can i do but sit and watch
and think about the ticking clock
as the sun falls, i do too
but i know tomorrow will start anew

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Tomorrow's another day
to start anew if we're granted
another day..there's no guarantees
In life..we can only hope for
better and new tomorrows

Nicely penned piece