The world through my eyes

you ask how do i see the world
i tell you i see hurt pain
the world full of shame
teens depressed and scared
parents who dont really care
kids on there own fighting for there life
i see no hope no life
i see no one who will be okay
then you ask how do i feel
i say i feel hurt sad depressed
and alone and i know i wont be okay
then you say i love you
but i know its noit true
if it was you would hold me
but yet you dont
thats my world
now whats yours

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In line #2 I find it odd because I don't think pain can be hurt. I think it would be a good decision to just take the word "hurt" out of that line. Good job.