The girl who ..

The girl who always seemed unbreakble finally
BROKE
The girl who seemed strong
CRUMBLED
The girl who always laughed
CRIED
The girl who never stopped trying finally
GAVE UP

She let her fake smile fade and as she did a tear rolled down her cheek and she whispered

' i can't do this anymore'

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

A great poem. I think your did a fantastic job here. The coloring helped to convey more emotions. The structure of your poem is amazing. You manage to convey in such few words about the human ability to give up. The amazing thing is that people manage to push on despite all the odds. We as Humans have the capability for amazing or for horrible things. I enjoyed reading this poem as well. :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I sure relate to this poem. Nice format you used.
The capital letters for those emotions.. sad yet .. isn't that how life is sometimes?
Nice writing!

Chloe

[A. M. Hood]

My life on so many levels.

[cfix]

This is amazing, Love the sadness of this.
This is very well written and expressed.