..White Crayon..

..Why am I invisible..?

I see you but you don't see me

I call out to you but you don't hear me

What am I to you?

What can I do to make you see me?

I don't know what I did..

Please look at me..

 

Silent cries from inside my room

from deep inside my heart

I'm afraid to cry aloud because it's to

hard for me to be questioned by you and tell you the truth becuase

you treat me like the White crayon out of them all

Invisible to the eye and not important..

Reviews

[Raven Wilson]

Very strong emotions lay over this piece, I like the comparison to a white crayon, although....If you look closely enough it is there, and it makes a huge difference. :) nice write.

[Kevin Chelsea]

Just happened to be listening to 'Rolling Stones-Can always get what you want' when I read this.

Excellent.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i know the feeling of being invisible, unimportant. very strong emotions in this , great write

[Joe]

Good rhythm