The way I feel

just an old one

I love you

I need you

I miss you

I wish you didn't do that

Why did you hurt me so?

 

I hope you know you smashed my heart

I hope your happy with her

I want you to know that I can't love you

like she can...

What does she have that I don't?

 

Is it her elegant smile?

Is it her soothing voice?

Is it the way she moves?

Is it the way she looks?

Tell me what it is?

 

I know she's a lot prettier than me

I just want you to know

I love you still

but I don't know if I can trust you...

 Febraury 8th, 2010

 Raven Radke

Author's Note

an old one as well

Reviews

[MoonlitAngel]

So I relate to this in so many ways, it's not funny. Like, I'm being dead serious... This poem like slapped me in the face and told me to get over it. >.< Thanks. Amazing, amazing poem.

[Matt]

this is a great poem.. but i want to know what ever happened to saying f**k them and being in angry love and not depressive love.... its way easier when your angry at them instead of wondering why in my opinion.