My Imagination

boredism

You lied, cheated,and broke my heart

but you can't get away from what you did...

You try to get away with what you started

but the truth is you won't survive what will come to you...

Do my eyes make you see the truth?

 

Do the memories hurt?

Does the hole in your heart hurt?

Do you cry endless tears for me?

Are you happy with yourself?

What do you see when you look in the mirror?

Who do you pray for at night?

What do you feel when you see my face?

I hope it hurts to look in my eyes...

 

My eyes are icy blue that will

freeze your heart and make you bleed

Cry your tears all you want

and bow down to my feet and beg for mercy

I laugh at your pittiness and watch you die

The pain hurts doesn't it?

 

You cut my heart now it's my turn

I watch the elegant, bloody blade slice your heart

oh so delicately and watch your heart bleed

and laugh with craziness and hatred

as you hear my cries...

"I warned you, but I guess you never got the message!

It hurts doesn't it? You tried your best to escape me after buring my happiness into the ground, but you failed.

Now you see what you have created and now I finished the deed."

My eyes see into youir soul and let you see

the truth...

 

               January 29,2010

                             Raven Radke

Author's Note

See where my boredism takes me?
comment if you want

Reviews

[Kelley]

WOW I think someone was a little mad.....?

[Domo]

Ha, boredom can sure bring out some interesting writes. :]

[Hollywood]

Overall it could be a good poem. The many dots distracted me though, & there is one typo at the bottom, youir, instead without the i.
The flow could have been better but keep up the good work.

[Taylor H.]

very good, very good!

[Matt]

this is really good.
great job

[MoonlitAngel]

Holy f*****g s**t. Ok, yeah... Wow. I'm speechless. Like.. Literally. Wow. That was... Something. Definatly something right there. Lemme see if I can blink. Hold on. Ok, I blinked, but my mouth's still open. Ok, this was Amazing. Amazing with a capital A. Defiantily. I have no idea what to say I really don't. I'm lost. This was......... Wow. Amazing write, Amazing detail (thats for sure), Amazing words and pain and everything. You displayed a LOT of emotion here. Good job.

--Blood (AmAzing).

[Raven Wilson]

Very nice, twisted and biting!
I love this! It reminds me a little of my own work :D which to me is what interests me most. Wonderful piece!

[Jason]

Such a brilliant taste of pain and darkness. Your words cut like a knife and I love it!

[Preston]

very well written :} i liked it!