The End...

My world thru my eyes..

Hapiness is hard to to have..

If only I could feel that way..

But I know it's never true..

To face the facts

that I will die alone..

The end is coming for me..

No one to share my love..

No one knows how I really feel..

To know that I am alone

and know  that no one cares..

The only person I can trust

is my own heart..

The end is coming for me

My tears crash around me..

and drown out everything and

every one I see and know..

The end is coming for me..

Drowning in my own tears I

let go of all the memories and

sink to the bottom of the endless ocean

Staring Death right in the face

"Your time is now" he leads me to my grave..

Looking up to the sky I see the light..

But should I head to it?

Should I leave and never come back?

Heading towards the light I start to smile..

I am where I belong here in heaven

I have found my hapiness...

 

               Raven Radke

Reviews

[Jake Martin]

This is really emotional. Kinda sad though.. I definitely know how you feel about this subject.
Overall this piece was very well written.. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

[Matt]

great poem.. but your soo young. dont give up on the search for happiness so soon.
life is hard but its worth it when you find someone even if its just for a day, to share it with.

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

WOW i really liked how you truly put your heart in this work of art....stunning

[Star Cross]

What a touching poem! You have captured the emotions that I believe you have been feeling and allowed us (the readers) to feel them as well. Truly in awe.