WARNING!- Advisory Lyrics

a conceise bible- not the faint hearted

 

Eat the mesh, Feel the pesh

And taste the flesh

Watch the day: steal your way

Observe the decay

Live the dream, taste the cream

You’re getting mean

Sleep the fears: cry the tears

But beat your peers

Kiss the boys: play their toys

Be wise; they're ploys

Shame the f**k: expect luck

Then write your book

Smile the lies: love the highs

And moan your sighs

Take revenge: give the henge

Accept it’s change

Reviews

[L.A. Swift]

Not bad. An interesting poetic form that expresses a chilled anger. Like I imagine it being said by some kind of evil creature with a knowing smile, tearing down someone merely by making a series of scarring comments. You took some liberties with the words for the rhyme which is just fine, they expressed what they meant to pretty well, I especially liked the one about the boys and their toys. (hehe)
The only one I'm a bit unsure about is this one: Shame the f**k: expect luck
Then write your book. I could imagine a possible meaning for it all with the exception of the "expect luck" part. The impression I got was that those lines, when connected to the lines before it, was trying saying in an almost sneering way that you should act like an a*****e then write a book about what happens. But by sneering, I mean more like saying it in an obviously mean, sarcastic tone.
Very good, a lot of emotion in it.