Till the Last Petal Falls...

Till the Last Petal Falls...

A Poem by Breanna Ragland

till the day the last petal falls...
from my beloved black rose...
you said you'd love me till that day...
but those are just words you said...
promise me the last breath you speak...
will be to me...
promise you'll love me...
till the last petal falls...
remember my black rose... so loved and dear...
held so tight to my soul...
by the thin strands of light that shine upon that dark hole...
remember those words you said...
"ill love you till the last petal falls..."
make it true... and love me till the day...
never take back what you said you'd say...
love me till the very last day...
when the last petal drops...
off my beloved rose...
held so close to my soul...
love me till the last breath..
love me till the last day...
love me cause of what you said you'd say...
love me cause you said you'd stay...
just promise me this...
you'll love me till the last petal falls from the black rose held so close to my soul.

© 2010 Breanna Ragland


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Great use of repitition and a beautiful write


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Breanna Ragland
Breanna Ragland

Munfordville, KY



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My name is Breanna and my passion is writing poetry. I love anything from Music to Art, Writing to Reading. Im easy to talk to and love making new friends. My favorite type of music is probably eith.. more..

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