Fighting

Fighting

A Poem by Breanna Ragland

Scratching

Clawing

Crying

Screaming

Hate

Lies

Sadness

Goodbyes

Friends lost

People gone

Is it really worth it

When all we do is fight

When all we do is cry

Do you think its right?

Well here’s an answer

Its not

It’s not right

That we constantly fight

Treat each other like dirt

Make each other hurt

If you can feel

And I can to

I think we can make things right

Don’t you?

© 2010 Breanna Ragland


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I love the sentiment of this piece, and It was great as well, just one minor critique. "thinks" in the second to last line should be things.
All in all a great piece added to array of others. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2010
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Breanna Ragland
Breanna Ragland

Munfordville, KY



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My name is Breanna and my passion is writing poetry. I love anything from Music to Art, Writing to Reading. Im easy to talk to and love making new friends. My favorite type of music is probably eith.. more..

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