Morbid Sex Appeal

rebel rebel party party

youre kind of sexy when your dying

when youre dying

when youre lying

lying on the floor

got you begging for more

yeah when youre lying

when youre dying on the floor

when you cant get up to face the sun

the crash is over 

but the wreck has just begun

you've got a halo

but it aint the kind from God

saintly sinner

Im drawn in by your flaws

Its kind of sexy

when you’re dying

when your lying

lying on the floor

are you screaming for more?

its kind of crazy but

I think that youre the one

well you got the bullet babe

now can you load the gun?

are you lying?

when we're dying on the floor

begging for more

I think we're dying

such a morbid sex appeal

we can do everything but feel

danger glint inside your eyes

stumble swagger; sugar, take me by your side

crooked smile and animal desire

between us two, we'll set the world on fire

**OldVersion**

You're kind of sexy when your dying

when youre dying

when youre lying on the floor

when im begging for more

and youre lying

now youre dying on the floor

got you screaming for more

no we cant get up to face the sun

i know im crazy but

i think that youre the one

a masochistic glint inside your eyes

stumble swagger

baby take me by your side

you've got  a halo

though its not the kind from God

a saintly sinner

Im drawn in by your flaws

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I'm not sure if this piece is an emotional outlet towards a male that had spurned anger into the words... or if it's gloryfying S&M. Either way..It was a vivid piece that makes the reader think about death and the emotions that flood us as we someone writhing on the floor, unable to save themselves.

Good flow to it...almost read like lyrics of a song.

Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

These would make really great song lyrics!

This poem is so dark and gloomy, but I still ended up liking it...

[Crazy Cat Man]

bloody and sexy :)

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Very well done... Hehe, did you by any chance had Nikki Sixx in mind? ;)

[Inkjinx]

Heh, I didn't think I'd like this one, to be honest, but I almost want to obsess with the topic now. I think someone else mentioned how it could be song lyrics, and directly after I read it, I went back through and tried creating a tune to sing it to. It's a fun poem to dink around with, and the rhythm inspired me.

Definitely. I think I like it.

[Bare trees]

It does sound like some S-n-M going on. I didn't get the line "You've got a halo, but it's not the kind from god" otherwise I found it very well done, though I tried not to look for hidden meanings.

[Arthur Crow]

I loved it right from the first line.. it just appeals with a deep sting of passion and morbid splendor.
It's the kind of poem I wish I had of wrote.

Bravo!

[Michael X]

i love your style of passion in this, its raw and sophisticated, and depthfully charged kayleen
this poem speaks valumes in many angels and has a perfect glint of morbidness that attracts the
readers curiosity, you've done a really nice job, you have talent.