A House that Hides Secrets

Grandmother's House

A house that holds secrets
Dead letters of past
White wings of egrets
Hide whispers or laughs
Frightened of asking
The thoughts in your mind
A shadow play dancing
More questions unwind
The secrets; The hiding
You wait to discover
Sneaking and spying
You finally uncover
A letter; A face
A clue to your past
Before its too late
The truth's in your grasp

Author's Note

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Reviews

[C. Rose]

SB means "should be"
MSB means "maybe should be"

"letters of past" MSB "letters of the past"
"egrets" MSB "regrets" Do you mean the bird or is it a typo I can't tell.
"before its" should be "it's" with an apostrophe
"truths" MSB "truth's" depends if you mean plural or if the meaning is "the truth is in our grasp"

I recommend using punctuation with this one.
I know not every poem uses punctuation, but commas would help here.

Great tension. Fitting images. Well done.

[Akshat♥]

i liked the poem...flow is just amazing...i just love the way you have described the house...nice work:)

[Onatah]

The horrors of your forgotten memories!

[Ben]

Spooky! Sorta. I really like this. It does make sense, you know? Good job, once again!

[Tallulah]

I loved this the flow was amazing. I like the wording. This was a great piece. I love how you describe the secrets the house has. Great job

[Jemma]

Every house. every home. has its secrets.
Some are better left burried.
Great write.