Hollywood Allure

Glamour is an illusion

Pretty town

Pretty run down

Should of seen it

If we looked around

But there was too much

Glitter

In our eyes

Dancing in the shadows 

Where the stars played

Make believing 

We could make it

If we stayed

In a 

Pretty town

Pretty run down

What a state of

Glorious

   Decay...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Loved the flow, the rhyme and the message. Overall great write!

[Ben]

Very good! Looks aren't everything, you know!

[April]

i like! all that glitters isnt always gold though... i have a short that is about a sudden trip i took out to LA.