Drugged and Dirty

Time Wastes Everything.

False hope
Anchor Rope
Dragged and Hurting
Drugged and Dirty
Empty Bottles
Empty Needles
Distort the Way
that Hopeless feels
Another Hit
Another Shot
Another Reason I Forgot
Another Lie
Another Truth
Another Day
of Wasted Youth
Good for Nothing
Ambition Dead
Another Day
Inside my head
Dont want to think
Dont want to feel
Keep me Numb
Kill Whats Real.

Author's Note

Please if you took the time to read it, take the time to leave a review! Thank you!

Reviews

[NoelHC]

An excellent piece of writing, I can relate, as I dabbled in the same scene in my youth, but somehow still managed to function in a "normal" world. Got away from it, but I can see how a person can easily slip over and let the substances rule their. life. Well done portraying that in these strong words.

[Annabelle Lee]

I love your style. The poems aren't short, but the lines are, quipped, and each one angry. Fanatastic

[Wynter Ignatius]

This piece reminds me a lot of my younger grunge years where I just said "f**k it" to the world and all around me except a very small group of people. Matter of fact, I just dug out an old journal to go through for prosperity but also to reconnect in a safe way to my darker side to help write a novel I stated on yesterday. Wonderful flow much like the thought patterns I have from time to time.

Keep it up, share it for the catharsis, live and heal from it.

[Justin]

love your style "keep me numb, kill whats real" good way to end it

[UC Poika]

To me the cadence sounded like the pace of the homeless! Is that what you intended too? Nice clown in the picture beside the title.

[Kayleen]

lol no actually i had no intention of it being related to homelessness but that is an interesting interpretation of it :) I can totally see where that came from after re-reading it with that in mind :P its pretty cool how one poem can be applied to so many different meanings and still work fantastically. My favorite reviews are when people tell me their interpretations of my poetry its so interesting to see how different things come across and yet still find a meaning to the reader, even if its not the meaning the writer intended :) Thank you so much for your review!!!

[Erik Daniel]

I like your style with this poem. And it had a sick flow to it! Well done!

[Jack Kennedy]

You know what I like the fact that you have your own style and that to me boosts the presence of your work... OWN IT!!!

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you definitely have your own style. this one almost has a 90s grunge feel. :p i can relate.

[Coyote Poetry]

A honest and direct use of words. Sometime accepting less is okay. No weakness in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote