Anguish

Anguish

A Poem by Gobinder Singh Dhindsa
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Deep pain of loneliness without someone special

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Clouds cover the whole sky, shows dark night
Birds sit in their nest, can't try to flight
Anywhere moon not seen, put off its light

On stair I sit, hand under my head
Tears fall from eyes, gaze roses red
I stumble in my life, still unwed

Her picture in my hands, her face bring out me
On bed of thorns I live, without her feel wee
I stare her picture, and mumble where thee?

I wallow in the mire, life full with ruin jerk
I don't swallow pain of lonely, don't do any work
I mis wailing without her, time seems like mirk

when she'as on the brink of grave, i never forget that time
Stare into my eyes with keen interest, she waive body at all times

© 2013 Gobinder Singh Dhindsa


Author's Note

Gobinder Singh Dhindsa
If any mistake related to Grammar then please help to correct it.

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This was really beautiful, i could tell it was written straight from your heart.
It was sad and very romantic.
Very emotional and heartfelt this piece.
this was my favorite part
On stair I sit, hand under my head
Tears fall from eyes, gaze roses red
I stumble in my life, still unwed

The rhyming was also amazing :)
I really enjoyed reading this :) Keep writing i like the way you write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very good, but it'd be even better if you did a spell check on it. Its easily fixed, so no harm done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow !!!!!!! i loved this poem , full of emotions and expressed nicely, thanks for sharing such a wonderful work

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was excellent~ thank you for pointing out your work to me. F~

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice secunce and situation created for the reviewing of lost love, and the background also deeply tied the sentiments... Very good poem..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. Some grammatical errors but a lovely poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You have thoughts that can be said to giving you the potential to write,well used imagery.Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can see where you're trying to go with this, it doesn't read very well due to the grammatical inconsistencies but you have potential. My advice, really work on your English

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice write. The rhythm could use a little tweaking but other than that it reads very well..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


So much pain and saddness potrayed in this poem! Excellent writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2011
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Gobinder Singh Dhindsa
Gobinder Singh Dhindsa

India



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