She

Feelings of love about unknown lover

I don't know her name
But she likes mame
I don't know her look
But she already for me book
When i think about her
Then I'm waiting path of her
When I eject my feeling
Pain of my life, she killing
She's coming in my dream invisible
When i can't see, I'm irritable
She's expression tenancy on me
Then I feel most proud of me
She throw snow in my life
I'll met surily in my life
She's look rare in the world
I think she's tender in the world
But I'm very agony from her
I've no consciousness without her
She's sponged my heart
I'm like without wheel cart
I'm blind without her
My life like poker without her
Dear God,
I request for her bond with me
I'm sure she also loves me....

Author's Note

If any mistake related to Grammar then please help to correct it.

Reviews

[sushi]

Nice write...

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful affection of Love and the explanation is also great,

[Becky C Strukamp]

You pen some brilliant thoughts here, some grammical errors, I like what this poem represents.

[Akshat♥]

If she (invisible) comes into reality and see this ..
and feel your emotions and feelings of searching her
like this..she will definitely love u back..
Awesome write!!!

[Sakib]

It's fun. But I hope you overcome your grammatical mistakes. Keep writing. :)

[Sunni Davis]

Very nicely written. Love is quite grand, isn't it?

[Anita]

this was very cute lol. I liked it. Again, some grammar mistakes which for this one confused me sometimes but i liked it a lot nonetheless. good job. =)

[Emunah June.]

Beautiful. Simpl beautiful. And cute too, in its own way. :)

[LinBin]

thank you for sharing your words with us, your poem reads like a prayer...xx

[BiroPen]

i dont quite get it?.....