She

Feelings of love about unknown lover

I don't know her name
But she likes mame
I don't know her look
But she already for me book
When i think about her
Then I'm waiting path of her
When I eject my feeling
Pain of my life, she killing
She's coming in my dream invisible
When i can't see, I'm irritable
She's expression tenancy on me
Then I feel most proud of me
She throw snow in my life
I'll met surily in my life
She's look rare in the world
I think she's tender in the world
But I'm very agony from her
I've no consciousness without her
She's sponged my heart
I'm like without wheel cart
I'm blind without her
My life like poker without her
Dear God,
I request for her bond with me
I'm sure she also loves me....

Author's Note

If any mistake related to Grammar then please help to correct it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Good to set-up hope and dreams. I like the description and the desire in the words. I like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shonali]

gud one

[Martha Gilleece]

Such lovely words. I'm really liking the repetition as well

[Amila Jay]

Hm loving some one you never knew, the one who you will be waiting for, the one that will make you smile like no one else. A lovely write :)

[Summer Windton]

I like this. I really do. I love the lack of commas. Gives poems a very unique look and feel. If only I was that original. Haha.

[realmwriter]

THis very good Lucky. Your search to find that one true love is very much a piece of who you are. You want despretly to find the one person who you will spend your life with and one can certainly see that in this write. Well done My Friend...!

[Hayley]

I see strong potential. You have unique way with your structure of verse that is promising. Keep writing!

[Sukriti Suki]

We have love, just dont kw for whom.....I always believe it is a great virtue to be able to fall in love. Loved this piece too. Enjoying your work.

[MsMermaid]

Interesting for you to be so sure of your love for her and her love for you though you don't know her name and seemingly have not been formally introduced or perhaps haven't even met at all yet. Kind of fun to get carried away on fanciful imaginings of what a love between you would be like. I liked this wistful and lyrical write. Your command of the language improves.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

A beautiful poem!!! Ahhh true love is beautiful! Great poem!