Who Is A Poet?
A Poem by
Gobinder Singh Dhindsa
Just think of it!
If you can feel smell of air
If you can feel pain of smile
If you can feel sound of wave
If you can feel depth of silence
No need of cast
No need of money
No need of religion
No need of certificate
If you have heart
If you have courage
If you have thought
If you have sympathy
Don't fear of state
Don't fear of death
Don't fear of critics
Don't fear of penality
If you can write truth
If you can write secular
If you can write honesty
If you can write anything
© 2013 Gobinder Singh Dhindsa
Author's Note
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Featured Review
Lucky,
Well penned; I love it. I wouldn't change a thing. But if I were to write it, this is how I would have done it.
You Have Life
If you can:
Smell the air,
Feel the pain of a smile,
Hear the sound of a wave, and
Experience the depth of silence.
There is no need of:
Cast,
Money,
Religion, or
Certificates.
If you have:
Heart,
Courage,
Thought, and
Sympathy.
You never need to fear:
The State,
Death,
Critics, or
Penalty.
If you can write, write about:
Truth,
The secular,
Honesty, and
Anything.
This is my interpretation of your poem. How close am I?
Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem.
Cecil
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
This has a nice flow, and a great message. Good tribute to the Poet in all!
Posted 10 Years Ago
This has a nice flow, and a great message. Good tribute to the Poet in all!
This is very powerful and truthfull piece.
I love the ending part:
If you can write truth
If you can write secular
If you can write honesty
If you can write anything
That was very very true :)
Great write every writer will relate to this, its a very moving piece :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is very powerful and truthfull piece.
I love the ending part:
If you can write truth
If you can write secular
If you can write honesty
If you can write anything
That was very very true :)
Great write every writer will relate to this, its a very moving piece :)
Wow this is an amazing piece... very strong and with allot of heart and strong emotion.... I really liked this very much... great job !!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow this is an amazing piece... very strong and with allot of heart and strong emotion.... I really liked this very much... great job !!!
then you're a god ? i'm kidding i truly liked this piece this is manifestation of poetry good write
Posted 11 Years Ago
then you're a god ? i'm kidding i truly liked this piece this is manifestation of poetry good write
Nice, an ode to being of poetic hearted
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice, an ode to being of poetic hearted
Love your form in this poem. Great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Love your form in this poem. Great job.
NICE. You really described how we all become poets in a very interesting manner.
Posted 11 Years Ago
NICE. You really described how we all become poets in a very interesting manner.
Lucky,
Well penned; I love it. I wouldn't change a thing. But if I were to write it, this is how I would have done it.
You Have Life
If you can:
Smell the air,
Feel the pain of a smile,
Hear the sound of a wave, and
Experience the depth of silence.
There is no need of:
Cast,
Money,
Religion, or
Certificates.
If you have:
Heart,
Courage,
Thought, and
Sympathy.
You never need to fear:
The State,
Death,
Critics, or
Penalty.
If you can write, write about:
Truth,
The secular,
Honesty, and
Anything.
This is my interpretation of your poem. How close am I?
Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem.
Cecil
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lucky,
Well penned; I love it. I wouldn't change a thing. But if I were to write it, this is how I would have done it.
You Have Life
If you can:
Smell the air,
Feel the pain of a smile,
Hear the sound of a wave, and
Experience the depth of silence.
There is no need of:
Cast,
Money,
Religion, or
Certificates.
If you have:
Heart,
Courage,
Thought, and
Sympathy.
You never need to fear:
The State,
Death,
Critics, or
Penalty.
If you can write, write about:
Truth,
The secular,
Honesty, and
Anything.
This is my interpretation of your poem. How close am I?
Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem.
Cecil
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Amen. YOu nailed it. Great piece....
Posted 11 Years Ago
Amen. YOu nailed it. Great piece....
Simple but elegant, it is a stunning work.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simple but elegant, it is a stunning work.
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Gobinder Singh Dhindsa India
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