Time

"What can I say.."

It is between you and me
Love begets love
She added insult to my injury
A broken HEART is of no use


Do not beat about the bush
Why are you after me
She was talking loudly
She gave me a curt reply


Hope sustains life
My hopes were dashed to the ground


I am weeping bitterly
I feel home sick
I have seen many ups and downs in life
Time hangs heavy on me


I am at a loss to know what to do
I would rather die than forget
Death keeps no calendar
Death defies all treatment


Time has wings
Time is a great healer

Author's Note

If any mistake related to grammar then please help to correct it. THANKS!

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

This is the very best collection of sayings taped together that I have ever read. They make a marvelous mobile of words, spinning around there in the air. Quite enjoyable. Good job.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

As if you are having a dialogue with time, a thought provoking write, pen on!

[Dhaye]

Nice release of emotions.
I agree with the last line:
"Time is a great healer." If you stick to that, then hope won't have its end. Just hope that your pains will be healed by time. Have faith.
Nice peace. :)

[EMMIE]

this is great...raw emotions, nothing held back! Great!

[Shivam Murari]

Its a great collection of emotions, the sadder ones. Good write :)

One correction : "Do not beat AROUND the bush"

[Akshat♥]

So many emotions are flowing here..
wonderful piece...i can easily relate to it :)
keep writing!!

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem. I like the ending the most...:)