Time

"What can I say.."

It is between you and me
Love begets love
She added insult to my injury
A broken HEART is of no use


Do not beat about the bush
Why are you after me
She was talking loudly
She gave me a curt reply


Hope sustains life
My hopes were dashed to the ground


I am weeping bitterly
I feel home sick
I have seen many ups and downs in life
Time hangs heavy on me


I am at a loss to know what to do
I would rather die than forget
Death keeps no calendar
Death defies all treatment


Time has wings
Time is a great healer

Author's Note

If any mistake related to grammar then please help to correct it. THANKS!

Reviews

[Raya Avans]

You asked me to review this a few months ago, sorry it took me so long to get back to you.

I really enjoy this piece and think the language you use is quite beautiful. Though I think you use a few cliches that hold this piece back, for example "she added insult to my injury" and "do not beat about the bush" while they work and sound nice, I personally think that creating something a bit more original would make for a stronger piece.

I do love the lines
"Death keeps no calendar
Death defies all treatment" Very nice. I enjoyed reading :)

[Jamal]

i could see a song being made from this

[OBWhiteHawk]

I like this, grammar and all. It really speaks a lot to me.

[Alone In A Crowd]

This is great, well done.

[Chris]

Snippets and consequences...

and the aftermath.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good heart ache poem. Nice

[Chiradeep Patra]

Expressions and emotions are conveyed. And that's what we want... isn't it? I am not seeing your grammar at all. Just read your heart. Keep going lad. God bless you...

[Thea]

Ouch, my heart ache a little bit while reading this. You've carved great emotions in this poem. And i see lots of line to ponder especially the ending. I'm impressed by how you express such things. Keep it up! :)

[DeletedAccount156]

95/100 rating. I really enjoyed this piece, and I see you write about your ex wife a lot. I certainly am interested to see any other works you may have!

[Ina Waltz]

"Time has wings
Time is a great healer"
Great two lines! Good job.

[Soma-ko]

Could you say that time is an angel?

[Ina Waltz]

Yes, I guess I could.