Loss of Love

 Every moment is a sin 

Every loss is a scar

Reasons unexplained

Lost in the stars

Everyone is there

But no one who I know

The pain is still there

Underneath all of the pain 

is a Broken Heart left to rot

Sadness fills the air

The love will never return

Reviews

[Jeremy]

I was a little confused about the meaning behind this. Are you mourning a death or a heartbreak, or both? I can see it going either way which works to an extent. Maybe change the title or make it more obvious, unless your intention is to keep it purposefully vague in order to relate to more people. It seems like it is a relatable feeling of sadness and grief. Thanks for sharing.

[Pumpkin Girl]

The poem is about death and a heartbreak

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I related so well to your wonderful poem well done x

[Pumpkin Girl]

Thank you!

[Anise]

feels like a terrible heart break to me
knowone is a typo i think...

[Robin Saxon]

Clever piece of writing. Loved the opening line, superb way to start.
Will watch for more of your work.