Well Sam you brought both Monty Python and Robert Frost to the fore with this write. I am a fan of both. So faced with that division in the road and not being sure which direction to take, a swig of the hard stuff helps? I enjoyed this zombie write and it's gruesomeness :)
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you, Chris. Sure... hard stuff always helps us make good decisions. (I'm lying)
Haha this was funny, zombies can be quite troublesome :) Entertaining read, as a critique I could say a little more in depth description would be good but i suppose u don't need it too much in this kind of writing. I look forward to reading more :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks, Sam. Short stories are my forte, and I mostly just write poems for fun.
8 Years Ago
Ah fair do's, i've not written poetry for awhile apart from yesterday, been working on music and stu.. read moreAh fair do's, i've not written poetry for awhile apart from yesterday, been working on music and stuff. Every now and then am back here though
Ha, those damn pesky zombie hordes get everywhere, don't they? Nicely done Sam, I like the humour of letting the bottle choose your direction, but maybe next time go the opposite way from where it's pointing :)
HILARIOUS! CLEVER! BRILLIANT! I'm flabbergasted! After all these neatly-penned stories from you, now I see there's been a sassy poet hiding in there all along! You've created a delicious spoof on our favorite poem of all time. Now who wouldn't recognize the tongue-in-cheek? Thanks for the big ole smile! (((HUGS)))
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks. Hey, what can I say? The comedian in me has to get out somehow.
8 Years Ago
Do you have other poems? I haven't run across any from you until now. I like this. Just wondering if.. read moreDo you have other poems? I haven't run across any from you until now. I like this. Just wondering if it's a new venture or if you've been hiding these gems?!?!?! (((HUGS)))
hahaha my type of poetry. you made me laugh and taught me something new. Robert Frost is an undead.
good to know.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Yeah, ol' Robert still walks the earth. His poems aren't what they used to be, however. "Wee poor bi.. read moreYeah, ol' Robert still walks the earth. His poems aren't what they used to be, however. "Wee poor birdie in the snow, you're tired and hungry, I know. I'll coax you here with crumbs of bread, then eat your little chirping head..."
now we both know I'm no good at poetry and I also know you are basically a storyteller but your poet.. read morenow we both know I'm no good at poetry and I also know you are basically a storyteller but your poetry's really good. why don't you write more?
I thought, for three lines, that you had started channeling our Mr. Frost, then Bam! You played the booze card and I knew, instantly, that it was going to be a bumpy road ahead. I laughed so hard reading this! Your form and rhyme are well suited to the subject and made for a most enjoyable read.
And I thought you only wrote stories, hah! Welcome to the dark side--the zombie zone!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks, JK. Yeah, I'm not much of a poet but do write a few. Mostly, they're silly like this one.
Ya had me at zombies. I have fallen victim to that show. It is my one TV indulgence. I cannot wai.. read moreYa had me at zombies. I have fallen victim to that show. It is my one TV indulgence. I cannot wait till October.
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