Hey Sam. Ever listen to Louis Jordan? Well I think his spirit jumped into you when you were writing this. I really loved this and I think it's because every now and then I get a Louis Prima or a Muddy Waters or a Louis Jordan visit and write something completely silly and random and sit and wonder where the heck it came from. Great stuff. This is really so Louis Jordan-ish that I have no doubt you are a fan or his spirit possessed you. I love it!
I can hardly write, I am laughing so much, Sam! What a fantabulous poem you have crafted in Jungle Love! The perfect rhythm and rhyme, the depiction, the humour, the narration - simply amazing! I love this poem so v--e--r--y much and with a heart aching from laughing, I thank you for sharing, Sam. Truly superb...
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Thank you. I'm so glad you found it funny.
4 Months Ago
I truly enjoyed it, Sam. Thank you again for sharing...
I Wanted very much to read your poem after reading you wonderful stories. You really know how to spring a surprise on your readers. Poor Melvin!! I hope he completely recovered by now and ready for dancing again! Your poem is great just like your stories!
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem.
6 Years Ago
Reading your writings is always a delightful experience.
So fun & funny & with a palpable jungle beat that carries thru-out! I LOVE THIS POEM!!! I love the playfulness, vivid word pictures, remembrances of different dances, it's all good. I love that the dancers are various animals, all well-portrayed with playfulness. Great job! *laughing*
Greetings, all. I'm a seventy-six year-old father of three sons who enjoys writing, art, music, motorcycles, cooking, and a few other things. From 1967 to 1988, I served in the US Navy, where I travel.. more..