I wrote this in April of 2010, and now it's a year later. When I walked outside with my cup of coffee this early morning, there on the same mailbox was a bird singing its heart out. I wonder--could it be the same one?
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First, I need an update. Was it the same one.? Anyway, I too; enjoy watching our local birds (including the ornithological kind). Their patterns of movement, behavioural differences between different species; and those who sing in their own unique ways. Occasionally, I have even witnessed them squabbling; jostling one another for food (from our wooden bird table). Your poem rhymes nicely too, and I hope that your morning routine continues to be as calm and pleasantly predictable; as depicted here. Thanks for sharing.!
Posted 5 Months Ago
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5 Months Ago
Thank you. I couldn't tell if it was the same one. The song remained the same. (Thank you, Led Zep) .. read moreThank you. I couldn't tell if it was the same one. The song remained the same. (Thank you, Led Zep) I love watching most any kind of animals being themselves.
No, you don't write poems very often, but when you DO, yabbada-wow! What an exquisite vision, one I have been sharing of late, as my temporary home is on Lake o' the Pines, in a patch of woods, so all day is squirrels, cardinals, loons (the bird kind!) and NPR...Most relaxing; a great way to chill: when the world seems to be shattering into little bitty pieces all around you, it's lovely to be reminded of nature's primacy, and God's wholeness. Wonderful, Sammo, just amazing!
I'm glad that it had to be written, as it's as beautiful as the song itself, almost. A nice way to give thanks for the experience, sharing it with others. :) I hope you are doing well?
Greetings, all. I'm a seventy-seven year-old father of three sons who enjoys writing, art, music, motorcycles, cooking, and a few other things. From 1967 to 1988, I served in the US Navy, where I trav.. more..