I’ve sailed the world’s oceans and gazed upon faraway, liquid horizons. Soothed by gentle breezes or bruised by angry waves, I learned to love it there, upon the sea.
Once beneath a blazing, desert sun, I saw ancient spirits dance on gaseous waves. Offering eternity, they spoke to my soul. When nightfall came, ten million twinkling stars swirled above in an ink-black sea of wonder.
Breathing air of arctic chill, I walked on pillow-soft tundra to Finger Bay, where salmon made their run. Way up in that northern clime, I found a certain beauty. Rugged, clean and cold, I might have called it home.
High above the sea and land, I’ve flown on silver wings. It’s easy to dream inside a cloud, and I longed to linger there. How easy it is, you see, to soar without a care, forgetting for a while, afflictions and despair.
Deep inside a forest, among the noble trees, I’ve sat upon a rock and pondered life’s mysteries. Of every place I’ve been, and every voice I’ve heard, and every sight I’ve seen, no other can compare to this one, most serene. Leave me long to tarry here until my final day, and then I’ll lie down ‘neath this oak and sleep my cares away.
What absolutely amazing memories you have so finely detailed in this amazingly penned poem, Sam. Travel broadens our horizons and we learn so much. The visual detail is simply breathtaking in its beauty. Isn't it simply divine to find a beautiful tree to sit under and ponder the many mysteries of life and simultaneously being able to leave behind the problems of the human world for a while. A poem which gifts a beautiful aura of peace to the reader and I especially love the closing lines: "Leave me long to tarry here until my final day, and then I’ll lie down ‘neath this oak and sleep my cares away". SO beautiful! Thank you for sharing this captivating write, for sharing your treasure box of memories and for taking your reader to beautiful places through your words, Sam. Beautiful literary gem! Thank you again for sharing...
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you. My travels are done, but the memories remain. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
2 Months Ago
I both enjoyed it and loved it, Sam. My days of travel have come to an end also, thanks to Covid. Ev.. read moreI both enjoyed it and loved it, Sam. My days of travel have come to an end also, thanks to Covid. Everything changed once it arrived, sadly. Thank you again for sharing, Sam...
What absolutely amazing memories you have so finely detailed in this amazingly penned poem, Sam. Travel broadens our horizons and we learn so much. The visual detail is simply breathtaking in its beauty. Isn't it simply divine to find a beautiful tree to sit under and ponder the many mysteries of life and simultaneously being able to leave behind the problems of the human world for a while. A poem which gifts a beautiful aura of peace to the reader and I especially love the closing lines: "Leave me long to tarry here until my final day, and then I’ll lie down ‘neath this oak and sleep my cares away". SO beautiful! Thank you for sharing this captivating write, for sharing your treasure box of memories and for taking your reader to beautiful places through your words, Sam. Beautiful literary gem! Thank you again for sharing...
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thank you. My travels are done, but the memories remain. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
2 Months Ago
I both enjoyed it and loved it, Sam. My days of travel have come to an end also, thanks to Covid. Ev.. read moreI both enjoyed it and loved it, Sam. My days of travel have come to an end also, thanks to Covid. Everything changed once it arrived, sadly. Thank you again for sharing, Sam...
Normally your stories make me smile, but this one left a tear in my eye. You've seen so much of the world. It is true that our memories are our treasures as the reviewer below noted, and you are so kind as to share your treasure trove. Thank you for sharing these things with us. Not just this piece, but all the many other stories you've posted here as well.
Thank you for the journey to all those places you have loved. You brought this reader some spectacular imagery and peace of mind. And your final resting place 'neath that old oak, I can perfectly understand. A fine composition and much enjoyed Sam. All good wishes to you.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you, Christine. If you see an old bearded man sitting beneath an oak, it may be me.
5 Years Ago
Then I'll make a point of stopping to chat. Hello Sam. Have a good week-end.
perfectly traced if you ask me... I sometimes wish I had opted for the slower nautical route rather than joining the RAF as I did way back in the day... I would have certainly seen more of the world for free.. but hey.. you refer to so many other magical places, clearly held fast within memories dear and only hinted at here on this page.......... thank you for the ride samuel, very much enjoyed... N
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you. I wanted to join the Air Force, but during that Vietnam era, there was a waiting line to .. read moreThank you. I wanted to join the Air Force, but during that Vietnam era, there was a waiting line to get in. Nearly by dumb chance, I ended up in Naval aviation, which gave me both aircraft and ships. One tour of duty with the submarine hunters (P3 Orions) included a good bit of flying, plus travel to destinations where ship duty would never have taken me. So my feet have touched earth on many parts of the globe from east to west. All just a few photos now and memories. How about you? Did you travel a lot?
5 Years Ago
while serving with the RAF, I was briefly stationed in Germany and had a posting to Gan a God forsak.. read morewhile serving with the RAF, I was briefly stationed in Germany and had a posting to Gan a God forsaken island in the Indian Ocean... I have traveled far and wide since then tho and measure time in the space between one vacation and the next...... N
As i read through the beautiful places and things you have experienced i was not surprised at all at which would be the place you would choose to end your journey :)
A far flung fellow with fond memories
This was well expressed and I was right along with you, although I am not big on heights, what with the silver wing stuff and all!
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thanks. My traveling days are done, but I can still go places in my memories.
I really love this! It's so inspiring, I want to commemorate my own footprints similarly someday. I love the way you've chosen very different scenes that can be compared in similar terms. I love the very original way you describe each experience, yet so true-to-life that each of us can imagine being there too. The things you choose to commemorate here are similar to the things I would honor about my own experiences (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Thanks, Margie. Yes, I imagine you've left quite a trail.
5 Years Ago
I just fell in love with this again! Wow! I envy you for thinking of this writing idea & for executi.. read moreI just fell in love with this again! Wow! I envy you for thinking of this writing idea & for executing it so wistfully & lyrically! This reads like a poem! *smile*
If we are fortunate we build up a lifetimes treasure chest of memories. They can help carry us through bad times. You have done a good job here Samuel in describing your personal treasures and conveying through them through words. I often think how fortunate I have been to experience so many stunning places. Of course being able to share these experiences at the time adds to the experience.
Here is to future treasures in the chest.
Regards, alan
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks, Alan. I don't get out much anymore, but I sure used to.
4 Years Ago
I share your lack of getting out much anymore, whereas, I also do not but like yourself, have a head.. read moreI share your lack of getting out much anymore, whereas, I also do not but like yourself, have a headful of memories to keep me going.
Your poem flows nicely due to the exceptional rhyming pattern.
You convey the content wonderfuly by describing all your lifetime memories.
Greetings, all. I'm a seventy-six year-old father of three sons who enjoys writing, art, music, motorcycles, cooking, and a few other things. From 1967 to 1988, I served in the US Navy, where I travel.. more..