The Old Grey Mule

A true story about my dad.

 

The news from the doctor was grim--dad had terminal cancer. The exact type wasn’t known, and they weren’t going to run any more tests on a 90 year-old man than they had to. He had long complained to his doctor about his intestinal problems, but nothing had ever been done. He was old-- right? Everyone dies of something, eventually. He had somewhere between a month and six months to live, so the doctor said.

                “You’re the oldest. Will you tell him?” I asked my sister, Mary.

                “Why, no, Sammy, I’m not telling him!”

                “He has to know.”

                She looked away, frowned and said, “I can’t tell him.”

                “He’s dying, Mary. Don’t you think he deserves to know? What about you, Patsy?” I asked my next older sister.

                “No, I couldn’t. I just couldn’t,” said Patsy, not making eye contact.

                “If it was me lying there, I’d want to know,” I stressed.

                “But he’ll be happier during his last days if we don’t tell him!” whispered Mary.

                I continued to argue. “He might have something to say to someone. There might be some kind of arrangements he’ll want to make. I mean, who knows?”

                No one wanted to tell him, and that wasn’t acceptable to me. I’m always the one who rocks the boat, it seems. Always the one who isn’t willing to let things be--why is that?  Mother always told me I was just a smaller version of my father, but she was wrong. It was her genes in me that made me refuse to roll over and take the easy way out.

                I announced to the others, “I’m telling him. He has a right to know, and if no one else is going to do it, I will!”

                Mary, Patsy and the others mumbled, “Okay,” and looked at the floor.

                I walked down the corridor toward dad’s room with a lump in my throat. I didn’t want to say the words, either.  Did they think it would be easy for me? An old, very pertinent  memory came flooding back.

**

                Crying inconsolably, I didn’t know about this thing called "death". Dad just told me about how everybody dies one day. Even he would die, he said, and it was too much for me to take. My five year-old mind wasn’t ready for such news.

                “But it's okay, Sammy; I’ll go to a wonderful paradise called heaven,” he insisted.

                “But I don’t want you to die, daddy!”

                I continued to cry, and no amount of his explaining helped.

                Dad rubbed my head like he often did and said, “Alright, well, you know, I’ve decided I won’t die after all."

                My sobbing slowed and I blubbered, “You won’t?”

                “No. When I get really old and grey, and it’s time for me to die, I’ll just turn into an old grey mule. I’ll go to a pasture and eat grass all day. People will drive by and say ‘Just look at that old grey mule out there!”

                That didn’t seem so bad. No grave, no coffin--just grazing out there in the warm sun all day. I stopped crying. Everything wasn’t fine, but it was acceptable. My daddy would just become an old grey mule.

**

                I walked quietly into the hospital room. It was hard for me to speak without my voice breaking.

                “Dad.”

                “Oh, hi Sammy.”

                “Do you remember that story you told me when I was little, about you turning into an old grey mule one day?”

                “Yes.”

                “Uh, dad. It’s that time.”

                “Well, okay.”  He replied calmly. Rolling his eyes around, I could tell that it was a hard pill for him to swallow, but then he began to smile.

                Dad lived to see his 91^st birthday, but passed away shortly afterwards. There was a funeral, but I know that wasn’t him in the box. No, I saw him just yesterday, standing in a sunlit field, chewing tender green grass.

               

Author's Note

Written several years ago. Two of those who were there that day--Mary and Bob, have joined Dad in the great beyond.

Reviews

[Marie]

Oh, once again tears fall. What amazing inner strength you had as a little five year old child, Sam! Boggles my mind as I think about it. Nobody ever has to be told they are dying, we don't say anything, but we instinctively know it. I love this story and your Dad's good humour. I love how he tried to take your sadness away by telling you he wouldn't die, just be an old grey mule instead, bless him. I simply adore the ending to your very poignant write, Sam:
"Dad lived to see his 91st birthday, but passed away shortly afterwards. There was a funeral, but I know that wasn’t him in the box. No, I saw him just yesterday, standing in a sunlit field, chewing tender green grass". Nobody writes as masterly as you do, in the simplest terms you convey what you want to say, so your reader understands the meaning behind your words. The journey through life is never an easy one, Sam and yet, we all have a hidden well of strength within us to get to the end of our road in life. Remarkable write sublimely inked. Thank you for sharing, Sam...

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank you. It's all true. Dad sometimes said things that were silly, but that wasn't one of them. He was the family historian and story-teller--things that I now try to maintain.

[Marie]

Bless you both! You are doing an amazing job, Sam...

[SweetNutmeg]

Even in such a short story, you managed to move me to tears. I truly wish we all could keep our loved ones forever. Losing a parent is like tearing away a sheltering hand you'd always taken for granted.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank you. Perhaps we'll see them again. I hope so.

[Chris Shaw]

This is a beautiful story. I just love how you broke the news to your Dad. It was a softer way of doing it and would have reminded him of the stories he told you when you were a child and confirm to him that you remembered them and have used that wisdom in later life. It takes great bravery having to break that news to a loved one. When my mum was seriously ill, the consultant told me that it was the right time to tell her that my brother had died. Oh my God, was that difficult, I thought the news would kill her, but it didn't. Sometimes we are faced with mountains and we just have to get climbing. Loved this story, brought tears to my eyes while drinking an afternoon cuppa. You write so well Sam. You have a huge talent. I hope you are keeping all your stories in a safe place.

All good wishes from across the waters. have a great day.

Chris

[Samuel Dickens]

Many thanks, Chris. I'm so sorry you had to give that awful news to your mother. It had to be done, though. I lost my younger brother 14 years ago, and I'm almost glad father had gone on and wasn't around to hear of it. Life can be a hard road to travel, this we know.
I can barely write anymore. I've about exhausted my supply of real-life events to turn into stories, and new ideas come hard. Despite all that, the urge/need is still there to try and say something worthwhile.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Sam, never give up. A writer is always a writer to their dying day. Life sure has its hurdles. Sending you warm wishes across the miles.

[Dave Brown]

Must have been a very comforting sight
but
this one hits a bit too close to home
but
MC2U Sam

[Samuel Dickens]

Thanks, Dave. It's never easy.

[barleygirl]

This is a sweet story of being put out to pasture! That is such a gentle way to view death. I think I'll adopt it! (((HUGS))) . . . Sending warm wishes for sharing this heartfelt vignette & opening your heart to us. Since my family has been very fractured, we never have conversations like this. It's interesting to see how a family pulls together, despite differences.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank you. With the exception of Bob, I don't think either sister approved of my telling him. When Mary lay dying of cancer 15 years later, neither she nor Patsy would face up to it.

[barleygirl]

I tend to be a "head in the sand" type of person, but I also applaud those who deal with the difficult things head-on.

[barleygirl]

I re-read this story & it seems like a very different story to me, five years later. I honestly do not agree that someone needs to be told they're dying when they're in their 90's -- a point that's already patently obvious. But I like the way you convey the push-and-pull tension of the reveal in dialogue with your siblings (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank you. To not tell Dad would have been irresponsible, so I believe. Someone who believed in God and the afterlife, I think he needed the truth and time to settle things.

[alifeacoustic]

A poignant tale Samuel, and one that brought vivid memories with it.
I too was the one that had to tell my Dad. I didn't want to leave it to a doctor who didn't know him and he had a lot wrong with him and for the last year of his life was in hospital for long spells, before being released, only to be rushed back in within a day. It was the most surreal thing I have ever done. For the first time, I saw my Dad staring intently at me, nod and then ask how Celtic (our soccer team) got on.
My mum is still convinced he never understood, but I know he did. I think he knew before I told him.
He passed a few days after the 9/11 atrocity and it was the last thing we spoke about. His answer was his usual brief but succinct self. It consisted of two words and both of them unprintable here.
I know he appreciated being told, just like your Dad would have. Some things don't need to be said.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank you. A few years later, it was oldest sister Mary who lay there dying, (stage four lung cancer) and my other sister interfered with Mary hearing the truth. It was a mess.

[alifeacoustic]

Well If when I am in that position, I know for sure that I want to know, no matter how it would affect me. I think people deserve the truth. Families seldom agree on these matters and it only leaves a bad taste for what should have been done.

[Kris]

I have to tell you I could feel this story when I read it. Takes me back to my own father dying. I did get to tell him I love him, your writing had me going back to that time. Thank you!

[Samuel Dickens]

Thanks, Christopher.

[Gaston Villanueva]

The way you write definitely impacts the readers a lot
Thanks for sharing this with us, Sam

[Samuel Dickens]

Thanks, Gaston.

[Marie]

Sam, I can't believe I haven't read this. You must have written it before I came to W/C. What a great story it is. What a wonderful life your father must have had.

My own father lived to be 90; so did hiw two brothers (actually, they lived to be over 90.) They all died within the same year.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thanks, Marie. Somehow, Dad outlived all of his siblings, including several sisters. I miss him a lot.

[Woody]

damn! I swear I'm trying hard not to cry. what a gift you have my friend! your writing is amazing. you know how to reach inside the reader's chest, grab their heart and squeeze. and what an ending!!!!!
may your father rest in peace.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thanks, Woody. I think my father can take most of the credit.