Got a call from my best friend Sandy Mills this morning that one of our dear friends and riding compadres Wayne Mears passed away yesterday after a long battle with cancer. It reminded me of a convers
Where The Fallen Timbers Grow
There’s a place deep in the woods Nearly every horseman knows Warm light bends through the trees Where great fallen timber grows
In the quiet morning trails Where nature comes to play As the light breaks bold anew And we start a brand new day
In this cold sweet frosty air As life’s cycle starts again You can hear it’s gentle hum As great trees begin to bend
Like the guardians of time They stand to mark this place Then they fall in silent night Making room amid the space
All these rings that marked their life Lie like tombstones in the grass And the new grows on their backs As the the next group comes to pass
Their sweet stories old as time And a song for us to share In the stillness of the woods As we pass their places there
For in life there comes a time When the new comes bold to show And we measure out the last Where great fallen timbers grow
This is so beautiful and captivating, and the story behind this piece make it even more so.
Both technically and emotionally, I found this poem well-crafted. The rhymes were natural and unforced, the vocabulary fit the moment, the descriptions were thought-provoking, and (though there was virtually no punctuation) the ideas were clear and coherant.
I enjoyed the core analogy and theme of this piece, with the trees falling, leaving their marks, and at the same time paving the way for the next generation to alight anew. There's so much depth in each stanza. I'm glad to have stumbled upon this poem.
I get vivid pictures in my mind...me, atop a horse, riding silently through the giant trees and seeing where one of time's quiet sentinels has fallen, now adding life to a different part of the old growth I am riding through. Wonderful poem.
What a beautiful description of truth! It's how it is with deep country, life and death, death and life entwined and endless. You've laid your words so finely, used grand meter and phrasing, yet left me with a sense of absolute calm.
From a Brit who lives in yet another most perfect place on planet earth! Wishing you and your family the sweetest blessings at and for Easter
Beautiful. Perfect description of the forest and life. I love the Michigan forest. Allow us to know peace and calm. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
This is so beautiful and captivating, and the story behind this piece make it even more so.
Both technically and emotionally, I found this poem well-crafted. The rhymes were natural and unforced, the vocabulary fit the moment, the descriptions were thought-provoking, and (though there was virtually no punctuation) the ideas were clear and coherant.
I enjoyed the core analogy and theme of this piece, with the trees falling, leaving their marks, and at the same time paving the way for the next generation to alight anew. There's so much depth in each stanza. I'm glad to have stumbled upon this poem.
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