Windgirl

The morning wind forever blows, the poem of creation is uninterrupted; but few are the ears that hear it. - Thoreau

head above the clouds

hair dancing in the wind

along with a cottony dress that twirled

full lips imparting a kiss

ticket to an eternal destination

what's a poor boy to do

Author's Note

"When I hear music, I flutter, and am the scene of life, as a fleet of merchantmen when the wind rises." - Thoreau

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a stunning visual of a woman standing with the wind blowing making her dress wave with the breeze

[Pete]

yes indeedy. been real windy around here lately - got me thinking up this.

[ETERNITY]

It's not a mystery: You want to play?
OR NOT.
The man is the deciding factor, of course.
Because if "his" contribution doesn't work, all is for nil...or "naught" ?
See? It's Simple!...Good work, Pete.

[Pete]

you make it sound so simple.

[ETERNITY]

It is simple darling. Ever see the female sit down when she does not want to mate? That's why some females seem mysterious. They're "sitters". They like to keep the male straining at the bit.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

When you do figure out, let me know...even though I am probably too old now for it to matter.
j.

[Pete]

lol. me too. the intricacies of a woman are like that wind - if anyone can catch it, then they'll know.

[andrew mitchell]

The wind is untameable as are wild women, they are both forever free however one can go for the ride while it lasts. Flying a kite is easier. Nice song, haven’t heard this one before.

[Pete]

when that wind is no more, guys often become "three sheets to the wind". thanks andrew.

[INIQUITY]

What does Thoreau say about casting aside caution in return for passion? I like YOUR writing. Not his.

[Pete]

thoreau and his brother both fell in love with ellen sewall but her father told her not to accept thoreau's marriage proposal. thoreau wrote, "the only remedy for love is to love more."

[INIQUITY]

That's sad.

[Einstein Noodle]

we can dream poor boy ... we can dream and catch the wind ... through the tops of swaying, tall trees ;) the wind calls to any who will look and listen .. and to each in the perfect way .. thanks for sharing and lifting me thoughts this afternoon
E.

[Pete]

such a powerful force doing so much. remember to hold onto your hat e.

[Einstein Noodle]

no worries .. i have stampede straps on me hats :)

[Sami Khalil]

You should chase her whether you are rich or poor; she might see good qualities in you instead of dollar signs.
If nothing happens, at least you tried.
Oh, well! Lots of fishes in the sea Pete.
Good baits are available. Hehehe

[Pete]

lol. maybe i should take up fly fishing - casting and tying flies.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe
You got it