Windgirl

Windgirl

A Poem by Pete
"

The morning wind forever blows, the poem of creation is uninterrupted; but few are the ears that hear it. - Thoreau

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Wind Girl Hair - Free photo on Pixabay

head above the clouds
hair dancing in the wind
along with a cottony dress that twirled

full lips imparting a kiss
ticket to an eternal destination
what's a poor boy to do



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"When I hear music, I flutter, and am the scene of life, as a fleet of merchantmen when the wind rises." - Thoreau

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This is a stunning visual of a woman standing with the wind blowing making her dress wave with the breeze

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

yes indeedy. been real windy around here lately - got me thinking up this.
It's not a mystery: You want to play?
OR NOT.
The man is the deciding factor, of course.
Because if "his" contribution doesn't work, all is for nil...or "naught" ?
See? It's Simple!...Good work, Pete.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

you make it sound so simple.
ETERNITY

2 Months Ago

It is simple darling. Ever see the female sit down when she does not want to mate? That's why some f.. read more
When you do figure out, let me know...even though I am probably too old now for it to matter.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

lol. me too. the intricacies of a woman are like that wind - if anyone can catch it, then they'll .. read more
The wind is untameable as are wild women, they are both forever free however one can go for the ride while it lasts. Flying a kite is easier. Nice song, haven’t heard this one before.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

when that wind is no more, guys often become "three sheets to the wind". thanks andrew.
What does Thoreau say about casting aside caution in return for passion? I like YOUR writing. Not his.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

thoreau and his brother both fell in love with ellen sewall but her father told her not to accept th.. read more
Dessi

2 Months Ago

That's sad.
we can dream poor boy ... we can dream and catch the wind ... through the tops of swaying, tall trees ;) the wind calls to any who will look and listen .. and to each in the perfect way .. thanks for sharing and lifting me thoughts this afternoon
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

such a powerful force doing so much. remember to hold onto your hat e.
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

no worries .. i have stampede straps on me hats :)
You should chase her whether you are rich or poor; she might see good qualities in you instead of dollar signs.
If nothing happens, at least you tried.
Oh, well! Lots of fishes in the sea Pete.
Good baits are available. Hehehe

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

lol. maybe i should take up fly fishing - casting and tying flies.
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Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Hehehe
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