Wailing Wall

Wailing Wall

A Poem by Pete
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After the first blush of sin comes its indifference.

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To Wail or Not to Wail - #SLPilgrimage ...

shiny four-string bass
shuffled deck without an ace
open and shut case



© 2025 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"We cannot well do without our sins; they are the highway of our virtue." - Thoreau

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Wonderful song on here with your Haiku.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Days Ago

a classic for sure. thanks for the share kim and keep listening.
i think this is a finely crafted haiku ... the realization of our sinful state brings us to redemption and change to the desire to be more the person God intended us to be .. thank you for the boldness and wisdom .. luv on ya brother!
E.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Days Ago

good to "see 'ya" e. at least they know enough to take it to the wall. we should all be so humble... read more
That is the truth.

I love Zep

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Days Ago

yes and I love zep too.

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Added on January 17, 2025
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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