Smoke Screen

Smoke Screen

A Poem by Pete
"

You cannot perceive beauty but with a serene mind. - Thoreau

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attractively rolled
lit, full-lipped beauty bold
all said, nothing told



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The perception of beauty is a moral test." - Thoreau

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quite like this, it's quite sexy,
I hope that's what you were going for.


Posted 8 Hours Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Hours Ago

yes - seductive. thank you l & a.
Much to be gleaned from this tidbit, as the ember becomes ash on this reefer! 🔥
"Light-winged Smoke...And ask the gods to pardon this clear flame." ~ Thoreau

P.S. Nice to meet you, Pete!

Posted 17 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

13 Hours Ago

nice to meet you too ms and thank you for sharing thoughts. "Darkening the light and blotting out t.. read more
really liked these luscious lines, the rhyming also heighten it to another plane. beauty will save us all, and a mind that can perceive beauty is one that is liberated. enchanting, this haiku is brimming with the appreciation of beauty.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Hours Ago

thank you em. "Beauty is power; a smile is its sword. The soul that sees beauty may sometimes walk .. read more
Love the title Pete. Smoke screen indeed. Brevity with an impact.

Chris

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Hours Ago

thanks chris, my best to you as always,
Yeah I once had a joint like that.

Posted 1 Day Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Day Ago

you devil you, and i thought it was tobacco.
dear Pete... as the Holidays are near when Silver Bells Ring... we are more aware of Amor'e and become a bit naughty and nice. sweetly, Pat

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Day Ago

you made me smile before i head out for my daily constitutional with milo.
Patricia Wedel

1 Day Ago

A Smile for every Mile as you walk Milo... smackingly Cute !!! Pat
Love it
Very good hope you well there

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Day Ago

thanks julie and happy holidays. all well here and hoping same for you.

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Added on December 2, 2024
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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