Did You Hear Something?

Did You Hear Something?

A Poem by Pete
"

God's voice is but a clear bell sound. - Thoreau

"
The Voices in My Head” | Pathwork

i hear the chatter
voices inside of my head
rasp pitter patter



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"A thrumming of piano-strings beyond the gardens and through the elms. At length the melody steals into my being. I know not when it began to occupy me. By some fortunate coincidence of thought or circumstance I am attuned to the universe, I am fitted to hear, my being moves in a sphere of melody, my fancy and imagination are excited to an inconceivable degree. This is no longer the dull earth on which I stood." - Thoreau

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What you see with your own eyes is meaningful to me. Seeing is believing. The voices and the chatter are of little significance. Wonderful words Pete.

Chris

Posted 1 Hour Ago


this haunting haiku about the thoughts that do not leave us alone was superbly written. the last line was a fast powerful swing. i suffer from psychosis, so this was especially chilling for me. it was evocative and twisted my heart around.

Posted 5 Hours Ago


Love this
Hope you well
Julie

Posted 13 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Hours Ago

hi julie. am well and hope you are too.
"The question is not what you look at, but what you see." ~ Thoreau
to elevate the chatter:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e5Pit2WJ6dI&ab_channel=DanFogelbergVEVO
Powerful statement in a few words! Excellent! ~ Maria

Posted 17 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

13 Hours Ago

wow, you know your thoreau! nice song you mention. thanks for sharing maria.

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Pete
Pete

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