Sultans of Swing

Sultans of Swing

A Poem by Pete
"

The sea-shore is a sort of neutral ground, a most advantageous point from which to contemplate this world. It is hard to forget that which it is worse than useless to remember. - Thoreau

"
Pittsburgh's Sultan of Dance ...

windows down
tires rollin'
breeze blowin'
radio crankin'
offkey, youthful voices beltin' it out

i remember the sizzlin', summer days
headin' for the coast
beach towels wrapped 'round our spirited heads
ruling everything
as if we were sultans of swing



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Many a forenoon have I stolen away, preferring to spend thus the most valued part of the day; for I was rich, if not in money, in sunny hours and summer days, and spent them lavishly." - Thoreau

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We felt rich, though, right? We felt invincible and indestructible!

Rolled (rolled?) down the windows, singing to the tops of our lungs!

Get to the beach and spend our last dime as if we are rich...Then return sunburned and broke. Great times!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Weeks Ago

so true what you say. we were rich - with youthful life along along with none of the burdens and pr.. read more
GlendaK

3 Weeks Ago

yes...............
GlendaK

3 Weeks Ago

Dire Straits...Great pick! Thanks Pete.
I can dig it. Oh, to be young and free again. Did we know how good we had it? Don't know about you, but I'd pay good money to lavishly spend a bit of that kind of time again.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

don't you know it. we accumulate all this stiff and it ends up owning us. i think my muse thoreau.. read more
Great work. I love the Dire Straits

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

music - the universal language. thanks twc.
Yes, brother! Right there with you!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

guess it's not just me. thank you jd - keep rockin'.
Those sunny hours and summer days were spent lavishly...and how we wished they would never end. Dire Straits may have sung it, but we were the sultans of swing!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

indeed. we may not have realized it at the time but being young and having such music made everythi.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Months Ago

So true, Pete! And we had the very best bands back then, didn't we?
Pete

2 Months Ago

I think so and still listen to it. I think it becomes a part of us.
;-)

........Great piece!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

thanks gk. happy thanksgiving.
GlendaK

2 Months Ago

and you Pete
Love Dire Straits Pete. Particularly Sultans of Swing. Love your snapshot memory here. So joyful. Takes me back a few years for sure. Happy Thanksgiving Day for tomorrow.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

2 Months Ago

well you certainly have good taste. i've always liked them with that knopfler. to this day, if i'm.. read more

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