Still On The Line

Still On The Line

A Poem by Pete
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We seem but to linger in manhood to tell the dreams of our childhood, and they vanish out of memory ere we learn the language. - Thoreau

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Load image into Gallery viewer, Mom and son hanging clothes on a Deluxe DS9 Sunshine Clothesline

as mom hung laundry
i handed her the clothespins
fond memories dried



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"We are made happy when reason can discover no occasion for it. The memory of some past moments is more persuasive than the experience of present ones. There have been visions of such breadth and brightness that these motes were invisible in their light." - Thoreau

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in 17 syllables you tell an incredibly rich story. this universal experience of washing clothes was transformed into a riveting metaphor of life. of all the small moments we take for granted, of all the people and places we remember but insufficiently appreciate. the nostalgia and regret we feel years later as we recall and wish to relive these simple moments. this is haiku.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Days Ago

yes, it is the little (seemingly insignificant at the time) things that stay with us and we cherish... read more
Ern M. Yoshimoto

5 Days Ago

stay strong brother. i lost my mother this year and it doesn't get any harder than this. but i have .. read more



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in 17 syllables you tell an incredibly rich story. this universal experience of washing clothes was transformed into a riveting metaphor of life. of all the small moments we take for granted, of all the people and places we remember but insufficiently appreciate. the nostalgia and regret we feel years later as we recall and wish to relive these simple moments. this is haiku.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Days Ago

yes, it is the little (seemingly insignificant at the time) things that stay with us and we cherish... read more
Ern M. Yoshimoto

5 Days Ago

stay strong brother. i lost my mother this year and it doesn't get any harder than this. but i have .. read more
So sweet this is. Mom often had me and/or my younger brother help her with the clothes line. And when I think back those whites against the blue sky was such a striking image. There was that clean smell also.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Days Ago

there's nothing like the freshness/smell of clothes dried outside along with the irreplaceable memor.. read more

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Added on November 12, 2024
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Pete

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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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