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Don't You Know?

Don't You Know?

A Poem by Pete
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The stars are the jewels of the night, and perchance surpass anything which day has to show. - Thoreau

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Shooting Stars Over Forest

i long for the night
hot breath of thick, shooting stars
sleepy, spinning world



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“I have . . . my own sun and moon and stars, and a little world all to myself.” - Thoreau

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Hi Pete,
I love that you quote Thoreau...such beautiful thoughts which I gather inspire you?
And, I love what you wrote... I have gone back to read those words several times..
"hot breath of thick, shooting stars" is such a great line as it moves my imagination ... thinking about stars...Recently at dinner with friends we discussed the probable existence of other "beings" in the distance...They too must see those glorious stars...
Anyway,
Loved your thoughts,
Lisa, still in Spain

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

thanks for sharing lisa. yes, thoreau is a major inspiration for me (i consider him to be my muse)... read more



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Hi Pete,
I love that you quote Thoreau...such beautiful thoughts which I gather inspire you?
And, I love what you wrote... I have gone back to read those words several times..
"hot breath of thick, shooting stars" is such a great line as it moves my imagination ... thinking about stars...Recently at dinner with friends we discussed the probable existence of other "beings" in the distance...They too must see those glorious stars...
Anyway,
Loved your thoughts,
Lisa, still in Spain

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

thanks for sharing lisa. yes, thoreau is a major inspiration for me (i consider him to be my muse)... read more
Shooting Star by Bad Company...cryptic and powerful.

I love the "hot breath of thick, shooting stars"...Words are power when used correctly.

I covet that gift!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

thank you for your appreciation of the words and music
GlendaK

1 Week Ago

thank you for sharing your awesome gift, Pete

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