Hup Two Three Four War

The savage in man is never quite eradicated. - Thoreau

they constitute war

steal innocence like a w***e

don't come here no more

Author's Note

"What is human warfare but just this; an effort to make the laws of God and nature take sides with one party." - Thoreau

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant. Excellent.

[Pete]

thanks twc. i'm so sick and tired of wars.

[camac1994]

Hello, I love your poetry, short, to the point.
No wasted words.
The video is appropriate as well.
Nice piece.

[Pete]

thank you for sharing thoughts. appreciated.

[camac1994]

always....

[Ken Simm.]

A very stark and human apropos poem . I cannot say I like it because of the subject. But I can say I empathise with your viewpoint.

[Pete]

a sad thing for sure. i think thoreau said it best, "The savage in man is never quite eradicated." thank you for sharing thoughts ken.