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Compartment 114
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When The Chips Are Down

When The Chips Are Down

A Poem by Re-Pete
"

If I am not allowed to laugh in heaven, I don't want to go there. - Martin Luther

"
19 Forbidden Places You Are Not Allowed ...

maybe i was just bored
they said not to go there
but being me, i had to go all the more
to see the swirling void for myself
to hear the deaf silence
to feel the pain of presence
to look for the excruciating details of nothingness
to open an unopenable vault
to taste the salt

guts twisted
steel cuffs wristed
a chance to open my mouth
voicing meaninglessness
tongue stuck to a flat roof 
reading dried, braille blood with chapped lips
learning how a middle finger flips
standing naked, exposed in the middle of somewhere
holding an empty bag of potato chips



© 2024 Re-Pete


Author's Note

Re-Pete
"I would rather sit on a pumpkin and have it all to myself, than be crowded on a velvet cushion." - Thoreau

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WOW! I love your poem but the last line, brilliant! And how it is tied to the salt and the title;)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Re-Pete

2 Months Ago

thank your for sharing kind thoughts amanda.

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Re-Pete
Re-Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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