If Fairies Wear Boots And Dance With Dwarfs Then Pixies Wear Pumps And Carry Purses

If Fairies Wear Boots And Dance With Dwarfs Then Pixies Wear Pumps And Carry Purses

A Poem by Pete
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It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. - Thoreau

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on a one-way, paranoia trip through what's left of my smoke-filled mind
i pull down the creaky, acidic, attic stairs and softly ascend
to the claustrophobic corners and darkest recesses
amidst cobwebs and dead spiders
i see things i could never have imagined

they say that fairies wear boots and dance with dwarfs
i heard and saw that along with pixies in pumps carrying purses
chasing away life's ills like an army of nurses
their wings, how they did glisten
i guess there's something for everyone
we just have to know where to look and how to listen



© 2024 Pete


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Pete
"This world is but a canvas to our imaginations." - Thoreau

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I liked this piece. Thought provoking and well done. I would have gotten the same reading experience if you had started your poem with second paragraph “I pulled down ……….” Let the reader image where the door was located. Thanks

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

oh, i see now. reversing the entire paragraphs.
WGSHASSERE

1 Month Ago

You got it.
Pete

1 Month Ago

thanks, i'll have to mull that over a bit.



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Since drug use in the Navy would get you kicked out, I played this song/album while guzzling beer too many times to count. The notion of faeries wearing boots always seemed a bit humorous to me, but that didn't mess up the badassed rock n roll vide at all. I like that army of nurses. Nurses are NICE. Entertaining piece, Pete.

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Pete

1 Month Ago

boy, you really do have a story for everything! a very creative song for sure - one that i grew up .. read more
love the description Pete, but you must have been high on something to see in your mind's eye those faeries with boots and and dancing with dwarfs.... great imagination...something for everyone!!! well done
Warmly, B


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Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome Pete
Warmly, B
Pete

1 Month Ago

are you back home in nc?
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

no, not yet, still no power and water…. we are in NY at our apt…. may be here for a while🌷
Hey there dear Pete,
This could easily be a wonderful poem for a child's book... not to say it isn'y marvellous for all...young and old... but again extra special for a child... whimsical...
You have a wonderful imagination my friend,
Lisa

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Pete

1 Month Ago

hmm, interesting thought. some people have told me that before. thank you lisa.
Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Really, other people Pete...so you might want to think about it...
Lisa
i think "acidic, attic stairs" will linger long in my mind in their citrus smell of rotting wood.
It has such a sensory impact, and in my personal read, it casted the whole poem with its evocative power of decay (sweet sweet).

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Pete

1 Month Ago

the seemingly unreachable corners of the mind. do we dare go there to discover and learn?
I liked this piece. Thought provoking and well done. I would have gotten the same reading experience if you had started your poem with second paragraph “I pulled down ……….” Let the reader image where the door was located. Thanks

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

oh, i see now. reversing the entire paragraphs.
WGSHASSERE

1 Month Ago

You got it.
Pete

1 Month Ago

thanks, i'll have to mull that over a bit.
What you can paint with your mind, you can touch with your fingers? Your words whisper loudly, Pete.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Pete

1 Month Ago

quite true indeed. the hands and heart wish to grasp and feel that which the mind summons.
emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

So it's said and - exactly as said.
Extraordinary. Whimsical and sometime serious. Couched in just the right language.

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Pete

1 Month Ago

sounds like you found it all friend. thank you kindly for sharing.
perfect imagery, very good


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Pete

1 Month Ago

thank you kindly.
Nice work.

That's a good song too. Good for the season.


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Pete

1 Month Ago

thanks. one of my favorite songs that i've always liked.
if we dare to search among the cobwebs and dead spiders, our imagination can find so many things we never dreamed possible.
I want to visit this attic in person...since you describe it so well in poem.

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Pete

1 Month Ago

the human mind is remarkable, complex thing. medical science continues to learn of its intricacies .. read more

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