Count Me In

Count Me In

A Poem by Pete
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Invariably our best nights were those when it rained. - Thoreau

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Pouring Rain by Rain Meditations on TIDAL

let it rain
let it f*****g pour
i don't give a flying s**t any more
i know the way in and out of heaven's pearly door

if it's locked i'll kick it in
you can add that as my final sin
so let the counting begin
because i might not know where i'm going
but i sure as hell know where i've been



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"As yesterday and the historical ages are past, as the work of today is present, so some flitting perspectives and demi-experiencesof the life that is in nature are in time veritably future, or rather outside of time, perennial, young, divine, in the wind and rain which never die. - Thoreau

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i love the rain .. when caught in it i decided it doesn't pay to run for shelter .. my theory is that by running we are running into more than would just fall on us taking our time ... philosophical, inner pursuits are difficult .. fraught with fears, lusts, recklessness and the desire to hide our selves .. i think it can be very discouraging at times; but rewarding for those who can be brutally honest ... i am a bit fearful at the thought of my kicking in Heaven's door.. i think knocking might get better results ;))))))))
E.
https://youtu.be/1VKpMI5Msa4?si=HcOvPQOCwVjkRsZJ

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

“When you knock, ask to see God – none of the servants.” - Thoreau

great, class.. read more



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When you have your goal set forth...nothing will stand in your way....not even Heaven.... so let it rain, pour, who gives a damn! you know what you have accomplished in life...this has some bitterness tones to it...like your state of mind is anger...which of course we all have at times.....but here, there is some unmentioned note of despair and the end....or am I getting too morose?
Always excellent Pete!
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

lol. i do tend to be a mixed bag of emotions changing quickly. perhaps too much thinking and not e.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

of course, always...
Warmly, B
i love the rain .. when caught in it i decided it doesn't pay to run for shelter .. my theory is that by running we are running into more than would just fall on us taking our time ... philosophical, inner pursuits are difficult .. fraught with fears, lusts, recklessness and the desire to hide our selves .. i think it can be very discouraging at times; but rewarding for those who can be brutally honest ... i am a bit fearful at the thought of my kicking in Heaven's door.. i think knocking might get better results ;))))))))
E.
https://youtu.be/1VKpMI5Msa4?si=HcOvPQOCwVjkRsZJ

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Month Ago

“When you knock, ask to see God – none of the servants.” - Thoreau

great, class.. read more

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Added on July 25, 2024
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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