Unquenched Scrubland

Unquenched Scrubland

A Poem by Pete
"

How prompt we are to satisfy the hunger and thirst of our bodies; how slow to satisfy the hunger and thirst of our souls! - Thoreau

"
Eibarian scrubland by Osmatar on DeviantArt

beyond thirst
arid sand runs through collapsing veins
cactus glochids stabbing
a nuclear sun scorching flesh
microwaving a soul on a glass turntable
as flocking vultures pick at the bones
not even enough breath to harness desperate moans

hyenas jeer at the dying spectacle
quickly
someone please get me out of here, take me home
i know, i should have brought another canteen
to weak to even scream
some things are better left unseen
lamenting the parched mirage of life's spent dream





© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"A stereotyped but unconscious despair is concealed even under what are called the games and amusements of mankind. There is no play in them, for this comes after work. But it is a characteristic of wisdom not to do desperate things." - Thoreau

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A very grim picture painted for the reader in this very insightful and visual poem. On reading, I was reminded of the old western movies growing up where the skull or a carcass was pure white against the arid soil or in the desert sand and vultures flocked down to dine on anything which had died and pick the bones as clean as a new pin. You very poetically describe what it is like to die of thirst in these sad circumstances. A very gripping write, powerfully inked and depicted! Thank you for sharing, Pete...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Months Ago

so kind you are. thank you much for sharing thoughts and for "getting it".
Mariej

3 Months Ago

Always most welcome, dear poet and thank you again for sharing...



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A very grim picture painted for the reader in this very insightful and visual poem. On reading, I was reminded of the old western movies growing up where the skull or a carcass was pure white against the arid soil or in the desert sand and vultures flocked down to dine on anything which had died and pick the bones as clean as a new pin. You very poetically describe what it is like to die of thirst in these sad circumstances. A very gripping write, powerfully inked and depicted! Thank you for sharing, Pete...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Months Ago

so kind you are. thank you much for sharing thoughts and for "getting it".
Mariej

3 Months Ago

Always most welcome, dear poet and thank you again for sharing...

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Pete
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