At Least Until ...

At Least Until ...

A Poem by Pete
"

I can alter my life by altering my attitude. He who would have nothing to do with thorns must never attempt to gather flowers. - Thoreau

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please, if you will
i picked some flowers today
roses by the old brick mill
from two bushes straining under the weight of countless blooms
wildflowers near the river's left bank
yet more by the side of a peace-seeking road

took them home and arranged them in a crystal vase with some water to imbibe
sanguine roses
saffron yellows
devoted purples
stilted, lightsome violets

finished, i stood back and admired them
intricate
delicate
loving
strong, silent, unassuming boldness

the magnificence and beauty of these creations
who or what could have conceived of such things let alone make them
at that moment, a tear came to my eye
please don't ask me to explain why
think i'll put my tear in the vase and the vase on the window sill

at least until ...



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© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"One of the most attractive things about the flowers is their beautiful reserve." - Thoreau

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A warm poem, nothing like picking fresh flowers then caring for them, nourishment, the beauty of it all….how do they become, who creates them, all of these admirations and then in a moments flash a memory and a tear; it reminded you something or someone, or the sheer beauty of nature itself
Lovely
Warmly
B🌷


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Posted 5 Months Ago


Tremendous work, Pete. Vulnerable and real. I bought an orchid the other day. It sits with me on my writing desk.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

nice that you did for yourself. something i almost never do but lately have been making a concerted.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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