Oh wow, a pink Cadillac, Interesting title.
This piece u wrote so short but straightforward... with the contrast between appearance and reality, like the pink car which may be impressive but lacks performance. (All show, no go)
Your poem shows the concept of superficiality and the importance of looking beyond appearances.
-Amy
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Months Ago
lol. yes, you seem to have gotten it all (pun intended). thank you for your time.
6 Months Ago
You're welcome, yes, I am focused so I'd see it a little more than if I am just relaxing and reading.. read moreYou're welcome, yes, I am focused so I'd see it a little more than if I am just relaxing and reading poetry.
like driving a living room. powerful engine. a real gas guzzler. tough on the wallet at the gas s.. read morelike driving a living room. powerful engine. a real gas guzzler. tough on the wallet at the gas station.
5 Months Ago
Yeeup. Good ol' American made. Built for comfort, a real cruiser. Ahhhh, the memories.
a bit of silliness but perhaps some tellingness - where will she park it and does she value it more.. read morea bit of silliness but perhaps some tellingness - where will she park it and does she value it more than anything else?
Oh wow, a pink Cadillac, Interesting title.
This piece u wrote so short but straightforward... with the contrast between appearance and reality, like the pink car which may be impressive but lacks performance. (All show, no go)
Your poem shows the concept of superficiality and the importance of looking beyond appearances.
-Amy
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Months Ago
lol. yes, you seem to have gotten it all (pun intended). thank you for your time.
6 Months Ago
You're welcome, yes, I am focused so I'd see it a little more than if I am just relaxing and reading.. read moreYou're welcome, yes, I am focused so I'd see it a little more than if I am just relaxing and reading poetry.
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..