Below The Frost Line

Below The Frost Line

A Poem by Pete

Fantasy shovel stuck in tall pile of ...

'tween seemingly subtle lines of prose
with patches in their hearts, clothes and souls
musicians, poets and philosophers dig recondite holes

depths and cavities that no one else has ever climbed out of or knows
it's not always pleasant or palatable to look at what truth, feeling and emotion throws
especially when a rusty shovel atop a pile of dirt is all that shows



© 2024 Pete


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Poetic thoughts and emotions run deep and can be hard to express the enormity of their depth that wave inside us. Sometimes they lay rust like a forgotten shovel because we compartmentalize them until we are ready to dig into our souls depth to spring them into bloom

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

7 Months Ago

gotta go take milo for a walk now. 🙂
Pete

7 Months Ago

uh-oh. hide everything, pb is in the cafe.
Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

lol too funny



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Powerful metaphor. Great work Pete.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pete

7 Months Ago

careful where you dig and remember to where boots twc. ciao.
Pete

7 Months Ago

... wear ...
Poetic thoughts and emotions run deep and can be hard to express the enormity of their depth that wave inside us. Sometimes they lay rust like a forgotten shovel because we compartmentalize them until we are ready to dig into our souls depth to spring them into bloom

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

7 Months Ago

gotta go take milo for a walk now. 🙂
Pete

7 Months Ago

uh-oh. hide everything, pb is in the cafe.
Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

lol too funny

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Added on April 18, 2024
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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