More Than Lint (Or So I'm Told)

More Than Lint (Or So I'm Told)

A Poem by Pete
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“Our thoughts are epochs in our lives; all else is but as a journal of the winds that blow while we are here.” - Thoreau

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Large Cherub Blowing A Kiss On Ball | Angel pictures, Cherub, Angel art

blind to every other woman that i meet
i blew you a kiss from across heaven's street

i watched you catch it and wear it 'round your neck like a locket
but then you took it off and stuffed it deep down into your pocket

hearts and pockets can both have lint
along with a hole
or so i'm told



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“Good religious men, with the love of men in their hearts, and the means to pay their toll in their pockets.” - Thoreau

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Unrequited love is tough to swallow. A bit of lint might soften the blow?

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Months Ago

nearly anything will soften the blow of a broken heart but not so easy to fill the hole.
I suppose she should have kept it around her neck, closer to her heart, for safety's sake. :) A good read, Pete.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Months Ago

a catch is not a guaranteed hold.
thanks fgf.
Ahh for the love to be taken off and hidden in a pocket then only to be lost for there was a hole.

To have someone throw your love away sad and disheartening



Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Months Ago

love can be fickle. too many different meanings along with hidden agendas.
Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

That can be very true

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Pete
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