The Fray

The Fray

A Poem by Pete
"

Know that if we sail, we steer. - Thoreau

"
Foggy Fishing Boat on Walden Pond Concord Massachusetts as Sunrise Black  and White by Toby McGuire

hopelessly threadbare
our hearts gently unravel
living on the fray

© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"[Thoreau] is as ugly as sin, long-nosed, queer-mouthed, and with uncouth and rustic, though courteous manners, corresponding very well with such an exterior. But his ugliness is of an honest and agreeable fashion, and becomes him much better than beauty." - Nathaniel Hawthorne

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This actually says a lot about the state of our minds and our surroundings; we seem to be living at the edge sometimes, with no hope for any solutions to anything... threadbare is pretty thin, almost about to tear... is that what we want for ourselves? are we unraveling with our kindness, fortitude, like we have nothing to give, like love, understanding,? ideas? this is disturbing to me, but actually true...are we on the brink of war? i believe we may be and that does put us on the fray....short but says a lot Pete, I liked it!!
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

9 Months Ago

like the analysis and insight. so true what you say - more and more it feels like we're living on t.. read more
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You’re very welcome Pete
Warmly
B.



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This actually says a lot about the state of our minds and our surroundings; we seem to be living at the edge sometimes, with no hope for any solutions to anything... threadbare is pretty thin, almost about to tear... is that what we want for ourselves? are we unraveling with our kindness, fortitude, like we have nothing to give, like love, understanding,? ideas? this is disturbing to me, but actually true...are we on the brink of war? i believe we may be and that does put us on the fray....short but says a lot Pete, I liked it!!
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

9 Months Ago

like the analysis and insight. so true what you say - more and more it feels like we're living on t.. read more
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You’re very welcome Pete
Warmly
B.

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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